| Calm. Calm is blue. But sadness...
It is dissatisfaction. Blue. An emotion. A silent ribbon of tears rending the heart into two billion broken, maimed pieces. Why two billion? I am halved, then ground into finer, more confusing pieces, never to be whole again.
Too many choices, thoughts and questions branching from two pieces desired.
One, dangerous, but besprent with beautiful, though venomous green tinges; the other a dull piece of grey metal, in which my dreams, my work and my effort lie.
You.
Which would You choose?
You.
Put yourself where I am now.
Your work? Your love? CHOOSE. Say Your part. You gave me this. You gave me her... You make me choose.
Now tell me. Which blue do You say I choose? Which blue will I put my very life into? ...More importantly...
...Which blue do I sacrifice...?
Drei, Drakken
† 031607 †
this is doc drakken's blog entry for today.  just to clarify stuff, "drei" is just "drew" with the "w" changed to "i"; "fricht" in the title is "fright" with the "g" changed to "c" because he found it pretty.  and, his blog is on virtuan databases and URLs. the rest, i'll leave it to readers to figure out. hehe.
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It's pretty detailed, but I'm guessing you want it more
spine-breakingly detailed right? Here are some of my suggestions to
spruce her up. Detail goes hand in hand with character personality and
can help reveal what kind of character that person is. 
If you give her armored boots and dark pantyhose, you can show that
she's a bit an adventurer, willing to go out and get dirty. 
Try researching 